Lorryl (lorryl) wrote,
Lorryl
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Oh god..I don't think I've ever actually cried over my writing before..But to lose an entire chapter...One that I was actually satisfied with..It's heartbreaking. And all I have left it the little bit I sent to Violet..

'And the boy still lay there, as still as death. What if he is dead? she thought with a frown. She shivered, before forcing that thought, and others like it away. She approached him slowly, the sound of her steps on the stone path muting as she stepped onto the grass. Stopping, she set the blanket on the ground, before kneeling down on the grass beside him. "Sir? Are you alright?"a hesitant hand reached forward, to gently shake his shoulder.'
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